I wanted to inform everyone that Gabatrix: The Terrorists of Batrice has received a Final Edition overhaul, in the wake of the audiobook production and the upcoming Gabatrix: The Batrice Crisis book that is to be written next. A number of improvements have been made to this story. Much like I've done with First Peace, Violet Wave, and Silver Rain, the Final Edition overhauls were designed after accumulating over five additional years of writing experience. The goal is to trim the fat of the story, improve things that I never knew about in the earlier days of my writing, and keep the stories up to date without sacrificing anything that would hinder the story in the process. It is also the goal to ensure that the story is not only fit for the audiobooks, but to provide the best product available in paperback and hardcover format.

https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B09CG5RFHS?
https://bookapy.com/s/511/gabatrix-.....sts-of-batrice

The Final Edition is now available on Amazon in Kindle, Paperback, and Hardcover. It is also available on Bookapy. Patrons will receive the Epub marketed variant in the upcoming weekly update. On Furaffinity, the update has been made. The updates to the story include:

- Numerous typos and errors have been corrected. Dialogue between characters has been further polished, and grammatical improvements have also been made.
- The story is a bit shorter without sacrificing any critical points. Approximately 6,000 to 5,000 words have been removed, reducing the book from 143,000 to around 137,000. Most of this removed is what I would call "Unnecessary Narration Dialogue." This was done to be more concise and advance the story slightly quicker. With the Batrice Crisis around the corner, the story and lore will naturally advance further when it comes to Fort Batrice and its characters anyway.
- While nothing major was changed in the story, some minor adjustments have been made in some areas here and there throughout the book. This is to ensure the book remains up to date with the later books. For example, Fleet Admiral Annika isn't a Grand Admiral as indicated in the original book, but is still looked at as a Fleet Admiral/Public Media Official for the Martian Fleet. The Fo'mil Yutilians do carry a fine hint of tiny feathers that line their bodies, which the previous book didn't imply.
- There are now references made in the story of Mizu playing the game Drakes, Temples, and Merchants, which Mizu started playing again later on in the Gabatrix series. One scene in particular was adjusted in the chapters to further indicate that he played the game with his brother.
- The final love scene has been improved. During the initial writing phase and the first edition, the love scene was somewhat rushed in its creation, resulting in errors and things that didn't completely make sense. I feel that the Final Edition has made dramatic improvements to this scene.
- Shira has been lightly finetuned to continue matching up with her personality in the later books.
- Surprisingly, very little else has been changed, as I feel the book was very spot on in dealing with events and explaining the logical reasoning behind them. No doubt, The Batrice Crisis will return to Fort Batrice, one way or another. :)

With the completion of the Final Edition of Gabatrix: The Terrorists of Batrice, Gabatrix: The Last Tank will be published next in 1-2 weeks. Gabatrix: The Batrice Crisis is next. :)