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There are thousands of miles that set us apart
And over the months, the desire will grow
Making the stream of time seem awfully slow
I won't lie, sometimes it will be more than hard
Our past experiences left us scarred
These wounds might heal, as time continues it's flow
But are we really strong enough for this vow?
An arduous trial for the strength of a heart
But thinking of you, gives me power to fight
I feel it, deep inside, I know this is right
I believe, that together, we can succeed
Pessimistic voices, ignore what they say
I know, I will hold you in my arms, one day
Just a kiss from your lips, will make me complete
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There are thousands of miles that set us apart
And over the months, the desire will grow
Making the stream of time seem awfully slow
I won't lie, sometimes it will be more than hard
Our past experiences left us scarred
These wounds might heal, as time continues it's flow
But are we really strong enough for this vow?
An arduous trial for the strength of a heart
But thinking of you, gives me power to fight
I feel it, deep inside, I know this is right
I believe, that together, we can succeed
Pessimistic voices, ignore what they say
I know, I will hold you in my arms, one day
Just a kiss from your lips, will make me complete
More poetry, this time an Italian sonnet for my awesome boyfriend 
grimfang
Hah, I originally planned to draw something, but it's not working out as good as i hoped, so I decided to write this.
(I will finish the drawing soon enough, probably just not today)
Edit: Gnah, somehow the thumbnail is messed up...I'll try to fix that.
To the poem:
I don't know really much about writing sonnets, so I probably have broken a lot of "rules" I don't even know of
and sometimes it sounds pretty wonky.
I mainly focussed on distinguishing between the rather pessimistic mood in the octave (the two quatrains) and the much more optimistic sestet (the two tercets),
while using eleven syllables per line (" Endecasillabi") and the rhyme scheme "abba abba ccd eed".
I hope you like it, hun.
grimfangHah, I originally planned to draw something, but it's not working out as good as i hoped, so I decided to write this.
(I will finish the drawing soon enough, probably just not today)
Edit: Gnah, somehow the thumbnail is messed up...I'll try to fix that.
To the poem:
I don't know really much about writing sonnets, so I probably have broken a lot of "rules" I don't even know of
and sometimes it sounds pretty wonky.
I mainly focussed on distinguishing between the rather pessimistic mood in the octave (the two quatrains) and the much more optimistic sestet (the two tercets),
while using eleven syllables per line (" Endecasillabi") and the rhyme scheme "abba abba ccd eed".
I hope you like it, hun.
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