YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

Can't wait to give it a try, haha, super excited for this

oh pog nice, lovin those awes

yay

It's good to finally see this complete. Gonna be doing a full play through from Chapter 1 to 2.

Y'know, as far as complaints go, "it feels like there's almost TOO MUCH content!" feels like a pretty good one to have! There's a lot of characters and work put in here, and a lot of choices, and a lot of things that you can do that have effects later on- which is both REALLY cool, but also overwhelming. I feel like there's a lot of scenes and variations I haven't seen- like how Ziggy won't digest you unless you let her eat Am earlier. Which, BY FAR is my favorite scene. The lowly cadet gobbling down the captain and being so delightfully, adorably, insufferably SMUG about it is exactly the kind of scenario I love. I just worry that there might be more scenes I'd love, that I just don't quite know how to get to.

Maybe releasing a guide someday would be nice, an outline of various different things you can get to happen.

Whoop, I take it back- managed to get a scene where Valnos eats the captain, and the other two cadets, and now I think that one's my favorite scene.

Glad you found it and liked it!

Got an urge to play through it again- still lots of fun, lots of character! Still feel like there's probably a scene or two somewhere I'm missing- but that might just be wishful thinking.

I love the idea of making just, absolutely miserable choices in a game like this. Like, for example; I love Keeper, the self-interested, crafty, adorable and teasing little Wulf. Definitely one of my favorites. I like that he acts without permission if you put him in charge during the ship battle. I'd love to be able to just appoint him to a high ranking position over the objections of all the other officers, give him full authority to devour whoever he pleases, and then stroke his huge ego and make it even bigger, while he makes himself bigger gorging on the crew, and telling any officers who complain to report to Keeper's quarters immediately for devouring, for daring to question my orders.

...That's not like, a suggestion for chapter 3 or anything, it's just something that's fun to think about. I enjoy eating as few people as possible myself, while helping others eat as many as they can, and encouraging them to ignore orders and discipline and do whatever they want at every opportunity. I like being a captain that's surrounded herself with as many adorable, greedy ticking time bombs as possible.

Sounds like you need to write a fanfic for him instead. :3

Been looking forward to this!

Just finished finding what paths i could, and gotta say i like what i found ^w^

I am curious though as to when we might see a 'gallery' for the game, get a chance to see the scenes and art we may have missed amidst the multitude of paths.

I've thought about that, but some of the incentive is to try to find vore stuff and pictures. But then again, having a gallery might hint to some scenes you didn't know existed.

Indeed, I'm fairly thorough myself exploring the paths, had like 12 tabs open at one point for the alts i tried X3 Perhaps have as something at the end, a sort of tree outline displaying the path we took and what branches we didnt, would give incentive to explore the other options

Made it through the game once and I enjoyed myself quite a bit! Nice story so far.
One thing to note though is that, on the end screen of chapter 2 there doesn't seem to be any option buttons. It'd be nice to add something like "Restart from chapter 1" or "Restart from chapter 2" at the end there.
I'll continue to explore the game and see what interesting paths I can find. :3

Good idea. I added a Main menu button.

Glad you enjoyed it! Feel free to let me know what you thought was especially good or what was weak so I can improve.

There were certainly plenty of things that I enjoyed. I'll say, however, that I feel like we got more of a glimpse at each officer's personalities and ways of doing their things in this chapter. Getting to know a bit more of them is always a pleasure, and interactions with them are a joy.
I might have found a couple of things which I am unsure whether they're bugs or not. I can list them in PMs if you want, since I'm worried some of them might contain spoilers.
Still, when it comes to story, I don't have complaints so far. You've done a great work. :3

Go ahead, PM away

Fist off, love the game a lot expecily some of the vorish stuff that can happen if played your cards right in the last one. Second... I love Ziggy as a pred.

Wow, I didn't expect so much content! I can see that much love went in the creation of both chapters and I think I liked the second one even more.

I did a first run trying to make the best decisions and to enjoy the story, later I started hunting for all the scenes I missed and I must say the variation and possible outcomes are impressive.
I really enjoyed the story and the writing and I feel I already miss this world and its characters a bit.

Thank you for creating this.

Thank you <3

I have to say, I was really looking forward to this and it still far surpassed my expectations! The possible situations and cute scenes were great and really fleshed out the experience! My first trip through and my second were almost completely different with different encounters and I loved it!

I have probably gone through half a dozen times and I’ll probably go through a few more times in the coming days~ I’ve really fallen in love with the world!

If I were to list my favorite characters thus far from great to okay, excluding Avloc, Viska, and Evoc, it be Keeper, Ziggy, Valnos, Elda, the priestess, Tung, and Glint. Not a top ten list but it might get there if more and interesting characters come in, preferably not ones well known outside your site like Viska and Evoc more oc for this.

I normally wouldn't post "spoilers" here because the creator doesn't want them, but this one is a little diffrent, has to get that you have to play the intro and eat the wuff pirate captain. If you skip the intro you can't convince her to be your willing prey.

Hmmm that's an odd one. I was able to do it myself. I only know the pirate dude and the rope are needed for that. My only other thought is maybe you where too late and it upset her, or the game forgot your data. Happened to me in one playthrough I had to take a breack from.

The game saves what you do to local storage data on browsers. If the options for the rope and such do not come up, it means it does not remember you've done those things and there's no data.
Best browsers tested to work for this is on Chrome and Firefox primarily. Not sure which one you're using on a tablet. Could also be that the tablet is not allowing local storage data, not sure.

The Save button uses cookies.

so... has anyone encountered this weird thing where if Mirr is your first officer, there's this scene where you can either talk or send your first officer to talk to an elder Kaelani (or something) and then there's no button to proceed? Is it just me?

I would love to hear or see a screenshot if you can recreate this. Send me a note. I just tested it and it seems to work for me

Huh... Well, it actually works now. It might just be some weird specific path (which I've likely forgotten how to recreate), or my browser not loading the page correctly. Sorry for the bother.

No worries! Hope you're enjoying the game!
Let me know if you see weird stuff.

This was definitely worth the wait! I absolutely adore the cadets!

I am pretty excited to actually get sinkin my teeth into this and testing it out <3

(I'm from Latin America, so I use a google translator to write this comment)
I really liked your game, quite entertaining and with several moments of enjoyment. The vore scenes are very good and are very well told, my favorites being those of the priestess, that of the practice battles and that of the pirates in chapter 1 (where you must get into a stomach and then they released you)
It also amazes me that to be an excuse to put a fetish on the game, I am surprised that the game has (for the most part) a good story and a good world. In other words, a well-written world.
Although my only complaints I have are two: the fact that to want to do a different result you have to redo the entire event of the game instead of just going to a choice option back (although not if that is the problem of the page as such)
The second is the saved one, I don't know if it's my problem for being from a different country. But every time I loaded a game, it gave me an error. That is quite challenging, I had to save the game by giving favorites to the event where I stayed.
Outside of that, I quite liked your game and I look forward to your next chapter. Greetings.

Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed the game my friend!
Send me a picture of the error, maybe I can fix it or know why it is happening.

Sorry, I don't know how to send images in furaffinity. xd
But the error that the page sends me when loading the game is the "404 Not Found"

I've managed to get Ziggy to eat the captain, and I've managed to get Valnos to eat the captain. So my question is is there a way to get Glint to eat the captain or maybe Evok?

Not yet

Can valnos eat the captain?
Where can that happen?

I'd tell you here, but... spoilers. If you want to know you can always send a pm to someone who knows.

Hey I just realized you might wanna touch up on the introduction bit explaining how risk options work now since you have a save button and actually wrote Chapter 2

Oh I also just noticed that if you fight off the green hair Wulf at the start then end then battle with a big disadvantage but choose to duel him defensively it gives you a win text but only leaves you a restart the fight button

Oof what are these experience points because I didn't get any. I managed to get the win in chapter two though but ugh it was HARD to figure out wtf to do. Also....all these options people are finding, I can't find them at all. Ugh my head hurts I need some sleep.

Wow, there's a lot of content here! And it looks like stuff was added to Chapter 1 that wasn't there before? I'm almost sure I'm seeing new events in that chapter...

I had an easy time looking for bugs before, but now with all the branching paths and options influenced by what you did in the previous chapter, it'll be a lot harder to do. Still found some, though, such as there being two Garsches after I made him my first officer, or still being able to have Evok help with the battle at the mines after I ate him, and then being told the Raptorians didn't have a packmaster. Haven't even seen all the routes yet, so I'll let you know if I find any more.

Seems to be a glitch
When the fleet battle ends, you can't enter the postbattle

So, I found both the Ziggy and Valnos perma scenarios
Is there one for Glint?

Not yet

is it them permaing you or is there scenes where they can be permad?

Yes, it's them permaing you

wow! just found this, this is absolutely incredible! the story, game and world is awesome!

Ok a couple questions, what's the risk with choosing either of the 2 orange options in the mine scene for the cadets? ive tried to go through every option and there doesnt seem to be any different occurrences then if i had them stay on the ship (other than them revealing the back entrance, but thats not exactly a risk option). 2nd: how do i get to the point where i can send one of the cadets out as leader, i got it during my 1st or second playthrough, but i havent been able to get it again

got the 3 choices and the special ending for that scene, wow that was good

ok one more question, how do you get the fat awe to appear with the admiral? i know you need to do bad but ive gotten low crew, lost the raptorian captain, and had an awful quality ship. i know ive gotten the fat one with less than that, is there a specific scene needed to encounter her?

You have to be fast through the islands and find her ship and let her take you to the fleet. Then you gotta fawn over her a bit.

Ahh thank you! Last question is about the mine scene from earlier: "what's the risk with choosing either of the 2 orange options in the mine scene for the cadets? ive tried to go through every option and there doesnt seem to be any different occurrences then if i had them stay on the ship (other than them revealing the back entrance, but thats not exactly a risk option)"

When something is 'risky' its because Captain Avolc considers them to be risky options. Does not mean they always turn out to be risky or dangerous in the end.

Ah ok, I thought it meant that it had a path that could be a bad end due to you choosing it. Thanks for the clarification, i've been really enjoying the game alot!

It is. I am supposed to be working on it.

Found this game a few days ago and I really enjoy it! I’ve played through it a few times to try and see how many people I can get away with eating without getting a game over.

There’s something I’m curious about: Whenever I get to where I have to choose to use my own supplies or scavenge a wreck on the beach, I choose to scavenge the wreck and Avolc and the 3 cadets always get eaten by a bird. Are both of the orange options supposed to lead to a game over or would one of my previous choices before reaching this point be able to allow everyone to escape the bird’s stomach? Because if there’s nothing I can do to influence being able to survive the bird eating us, then I think it’s kinda unfair that I’m not allowed to scavenge the wrecked ship to avoid using my own supplies.

Also, I’m not sure if this is a bug or not, but whenever I go through both chapters and get a Voracity of 8 devoured, there isn’t any special text under it like there normally is. So instead of being told of how the crew is wary of my stomach grumbling when I get annoyed, I’m just not given any kind of special message at all! I also think it’s weird on how Avolc hasn’t gotten even fatter after eating 8 people!

That’s all I have to say. Looking forward to Chapter 3!

Hm, there should be a couple of choices to get out of the Pelican encounter. If you got niggling injuries from previous choices, dealing with it yourself gets you eaten. You can also guide the cadets to deal with it but it has some prerequisites to work. I suppose i can bugcheck it to make sure its working at some point.

Avolcs portrait has three stages of fatness, she should be gaining weight to portray your voracity. The flavor text from chapter 1 ending could be improved if you managed to get that many though, yes.

I figured out how to get past that pelican! Just needed to make some different choices before I got there.

Is it possible to eat that many people in Chapter 1? Because I can only get to a Voracity of 8 by going through both Chapter 1 and Chapter 2. And after testing it a few times, I figured out that Avolc’s portrait gains weight after eating 4 people, so if she’s supposed to have more stages of fatness after that, then it’s either too subtle for me to notice or I’m not eating enough people to trigger the next stages.

There's normal, above 2 and above 6 currently. They're not huge differences except she looks more coy at third stage.

Hey, I noticed a couple issues with one my more recent playthroughs:

If the raptorians mutiny and Evok gets eaten, he still shows up later at the gator mine in chapter 2.

Also, I noticed that if Arn bites it during the raptorian mutiny, the prompt to replace him doesn't happen and he still shows up as your first officer in chapter 2. He seemed to persist as your first officer even after he got eaten in in other events in chapter 2 as well :V

Well darn

I have to wonder if theres some sort of guide written up for this. Been replaying it for awhile and I still haven't seen everything, like the Valnos scenario a few people mentioned.

I'll try make some kind thing for Chapter 3. Have some ideas.

The game is currently not working. I can get a few choices in on chapter 1 or 2, but then all the choices that should let me continue just aren't there. Love the game though back when it was working.

Oh yeah? I'll have a look at it later today. But what happens exactly?

I open the game, and I select either chapter one or two. Then, I try to make a few choices to go in. For chapter one, I can get through all the questioning after the intro, but it just doesn't give me any options after that. For chapter two, I can get to an island and make a few choices before it does the same thing. I can take screenshots if you have somewhere that I can send them to you.