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The artwork in this submission is a mixed media rendering of actor Rick Moranis as the character Dark Helmet from the 1987 Mel Brooks film Spaceballs. The rendering was made using both graphic pencils and charcoal pencils, and the rendering was illustrated on a 12 inch by 9 inch sheet of vellum Bristol.
Spaceballs is a comic spoof of various popular science-fiction films, mainly the films of The Star Wars Trilogy. Rick Moranis’ character, Dark Helmet, is an obvious send-up of the black-armored Jedi Darth Vader. Helmet’s main weapon is the Schwartz Ring, which he uses to generate glowing phallic swords or to torture incompetent minions by sending powerful energy to their scrotums. Also, it never occurred to me until fairly recent that Helmet’s headgear has a somewhat phallic shape to it.
This is my first major use of charcoal pencils in any work. A particular source of annoyance with working in only pencils is that I never could seem to get rich black colors. In fact, jet black ebony pencils seemed to leave a greasy texture that would reflect light. With a charcoal pencil, I could get a very rich black that doesn’t reflect light. That was especially important for this project since Helmet features a large dominance of black. However, working with charcoal presents another problem: charcoal is messy. Controlling the charcoal is more arduous that controlling the pencils.
I am unsure as to whether or not I will use charcoals in the future. I have to admit that I do like the fact that it achieves blacks that my pencils cannot.
Thank you for visiting and may the Schwartz be with you.
PROJECT #343
Comments are welcome, but please mind your language.
The artwork in this submission is a mixed media rendering of actor Rick Moranis as the character Dark Helmet from the 1987 Mel Brooks film Spaceballs. The rendering was made using both graphic pencils and charcoal pencils, and the rendering was illustrated on a 12 inch by 9 inch sheet of vellum Bristol.
Spaceballs is a comic spoof of various popular science-fiction films, mainly the films of The Star Wars Trilogy. Rick Moranis’ character, Dark Helmet, is an obvious send-up of the black-armored Jedi Darth Vader. Helmet’s main weapon is the Schwartz Ring, which he uses to generate glowing phallic swords or to torture incompetent minions by sending powerful energy to their scrotums. Also, it never occurred to me until fairly recent that Helmet’s headgear has a somewhat phallic shape to it.
This is my first major use of charcoal pencils in any work. A particular source of annoyance with working in only pencils is that I never could seem to get rich black colors. In fact, jet black ebony pencils seemed to leave a greasy texture that would reflect light. With a charcoal pencil, I could get a very rich black that doesn’t reflect light. That was especially important for this project since Helmet features a large dominance of black. However, working with charcoal presents another problem: charcoal is messy. Controlling the charcoal is more arduous that controlling the pencils.
I am unsure as to whether or not I will use charcoals in the future. I have to admit that I do like the fact that it achieves blacks that my pencils cannot.
Thank you for visiting and may the Schwartz be with you.
PROJECT #343
Comments are welcome, but please mind your language.
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Category Artwork (Traditional) / Human
Species Mammal (Other)
Gender Male
Size 1000 x 727px
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The lines around the nose, cheek, and lips area are very good. You can see a definite distinction between the areas. Also the shading for his collar is very good. You can really see that there is something over the skin versus just a light to dark area.
(also, Darth Vader is a Sith, not Jedi)
(also, Darth Vader is a Sith, not Jedi)
Charcoal is indeed very messy. There are some little tips though that can help.
Have you ever used vine charcoal or charcoal pencils? Those help to concentrate the medium and alleviate unnecessary smudgy residue. This glove helps a little with the smearing as well, I've found. It's also very cheap.
http://www.smudgeguard.com/
But it looks very nice, I must say! The only suggestion I would make would be that if you're going for true realism, try to blend your shadows a little more. I'm sure part of the trouble is due to the mixed media of the piece, but it's a workable uggestion. :)
Have you ever used vine charcoal or charcoal pencils? Those help to concentrate the medium and alleviate unnecessary smudgy residue. This glove helps a little with the smearing as well, I've found. It's also very cheap.
http://www.smudgeguard.com/
But it looks very nice, I must say! The only suggestion I would make would be that if you're going for true realism, try to blend your shadows a little more. I'm sure part of the trouble is due to the mixed media of the piece, but it's a workable uggestion. :)
I appreciate your critique. Blending is indeed a little difficult to do with graphite and charcoal since the substances seem to abhor one another. I'll give your criticism a thought.
I was using charcoal pencils for the large area of black in this drawing, and also a white charcoal in a few small spots. I appreciate that link and I'll do some investigating about it. I've mainly been using a piece of wax paper under my palm to prevent or reduce smudging the charcoal. That glove might be interesting.
I greatly appreciate your thought-out comments and critiques. Thanks for visiting!
I was using charcoal pencils for the large area of black in this drawing, and also a white charcoal in a few small spots. I appreciate that link and I'll do some investigating about it. I've mainly been using a piece of wax paper under my palm to prevent or reduce smudging the charcoal. That glove might be interesting.
I greatly appreciate your thought-out comments and critiques. Thanks for visiting!
I grew up with this movie. So many of the jokes went over my head... or over my helmet...? xD
I can pretty much call this movie scene for scene. I love this movie so much. I normally don't fave anything that wasn't made for me. But I made an exception for this. This is the ONE piece of art in my faves that I didn't commission/buy/trade/etc.
Fantastic work you've done here, I need to show my parents, they'll get a kick out of this! I want to buy this xD
I can pretty much call this movie scene for scene. I love this movie so much. I normally don't fave anything that wasn't made for me. But I made an exception for this. This is the ONE piece of art in my faves that I didn't commission/buy/trade/etc.
Fantastic work you've done here, I need to show my parents, they'll get a kick out of this! I want to buy this xD
Spaceballs is a favorite film from my childhood as well. I tend to admonish critics who lambaste it for being four years too late in the making. It's an excellent spoof and something I always enjoyed when my parents rented it for me. While it's not necessarily Mel Brooks' best, it's certainly far from his worst and I would certainly say it is essential watching.
I am honored that you enjoy this piece very much. As it is, I am very surprised at the popularity that particular piece seems to enjoy. It seems to be growing into my most favored work.
Given how well this piece has taken off, I may very well make high quality prints of it on my Etsy account. If it is of interest to you, I can send you a private note verifying when the prints are available.
Thanks for visiting!
I am honored that you enjoy this piece very much. As it is, I am very surprised at the popularity that particular piece seems to enjoy. It seems to be growing into my most favored work.
Given how well this piece has taken off, I may very well make high quality prints of it on my Etsy account. If it is of interest to you, I can send you a private note verifying when the prints are available.
Thanks for visiting!
I'd appreciate the note on when prints would be available actually. I'd definitely spend money on this.
As far as Mel Brooks goes, Spaceballs has to be my favorite for the nostalgia factor. Blazing Saddles was absolutely brilliant, and I thoroughly enjoyed History of the World Part 1. (Jews in Space has the same tune to it as Men in Tights xD) Young Frankenstein never grew on me, though it was easily one of my parents favorites.
My mom told me the other day that Rick's wife was apparently dying of cancer while he was filming this. And Mel said that he never once came to the set with a "chip on his shoulder". How sad to be working on a movie while your wife is dying. I really admire him as an actor after finding that out.
But anyways, thanks for posting this and thanks for the rush of memories that flooded back when i viewed this submission :)
As far as Mel Brooks goes, Spaceballs has to be my favorite for the nostalgia factor. Blazing Saddles was absolutely brilliant, and I thoroughly enjoyed History of the World Part 1. (Jews in Space has the same tune to it as Men in Tights xD) Young Frankenstein never grew on me, though it was easily one of my parents favorites.
My mom told me the other day that Rick's wife was apparently dying of cancer while he was filming this. And Mel said that he never once came to the set with a "chip on his shoulder". How sad to be working on a movie while your wife is dying. I really admire him as an actor after finding that out.
But anyways, thanks for posting this and thanks for the rush of memories that flooded back when i viewed this submission :)
First and foremost: Impressive.
My next comment is thank you oh so kindly for correctly using light sources in your shading of his helmet. Florescent lighting in a big room, I can only assume. Like in the movie.
My only gripe if it even is much of one...would be the ear to face blackness. It's not a serious think, but I personally don't think it'd go jet black in that helmet...but again, I mean no offense, no troubles to ya o.o;
All in all I must say this is one of the diamonds in the rough of FA
My next comment is thank you oh so kindly for correctly using light sources in your shading of his helmet. Florescent lighting in a big room, I can only assume. Like in the movie.
My only gripe if it even is much of one...would be the ear to face blackness. It's not a serious think, but I personally don't think it'd go jet black in that helmet...but again, I mean no offense, no troubles to ya o.o;
All in all I must say this is one of the diamonds in the rough of FA
Thank you very much for your critique.
As for the use of jet black, I have to defend. Viewing a lot of my older works, I noted a vicious demand for darker blacks that I wasn't getting with the graphic pencils. The use of rich black and high contrast helps the illustration stand out.
However, I am grateful that you very much enjoy this piece. Thanks for visiting!
As for the use of jet black, I have to defend. Viewing a lot of my older works, I noted a vicious demand for darker blacks that I wasn't getting with the graphic pencils. The use of rich black and high contrast helps the illustration stand out.
However, I am grateful that you very much enjoy this piece. Thanks for visiting!
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