Special Collab Sketch Comic Page Commission for  Ardennon, thank you!

This is the third page of the three orders purchased by Ardennon, starring the commissioner's Sergal, Mavi! Everything is set as the canon-compliant design that can be seen in the modern era of Gold Ring.

This piece has been done in a collaboration between me and my dear partner and brother and one of the Vilous official Lore Masters  Coju. Coju provided initial ideas, sketches, and designs of every material, and those have been finished by me!

📖What the Artwork Tells📖

On the third page, all the children rushing in joy to Mavi and her bodyguard's laps and sides, climbing all over them or laying down on or close by them.

🌟 Vilous Lore-Supportive TIPS 🌟

All depictions of the Eltus children are fully designed to be accurate to canonical lore and knowledge.

The major parts of the knowledge have been mentioned in the prior post, however, for this entry also, we would like to spotlight a part that can be considered especially important and worth spreading.

-Nevrean children has NO gender difference

This is somehow little known despite this is pretty essential knowledge. All Nevrean children do have NO or very little gender differences in both appearance and behavior throughout their infancy to childhood. So to put it simply, how they grow is exactly like how chickens or peafowls grow. (Begin with no gender differences but get them later.) Specifically, regardless of their biological sexes, the entire feathers are in gray-toned hues and they have long wings that make them flyable.

So, the Nevrean children depicted on the page could be both/either female or male. Perhaps, the ponytailed one is a girl but another one is a boy, but when considering the zero or very tiny gender/sex difference in Nevrean children, it could be an opposite result, or both even could be males, or both being females. So both sexes are able to fly, and all Nevrean children who have no gender difference even in behaviors and mindset are very energetic and innocent and playful regardless of sexes, they love to engage in a "play" flight.

So when they will become like what you know? You'll see. When they have reached puberty, they attain distinct sexual dimorphism at once, they will finally experience a big-scaled change to separate into "female" or "male" clearly. The picture behind the children, on the wall of the room, just explains how Nevreans grow.

-A picture book made of purple paper

You may find a picture book that an Agudner child has is colored in purple. Actually, this is a canon-compliant depiction based on how paper material in Planet Tal is different from that of Earth.

As many wooden materials on Planet Tal do, the paper also relies on Talyxian woods as main resources. It brings more or less alien and exotic hues rather than pure white paper unlike what you can find here.

As general technologies on Planet Tal are, papermaking technology is also a bit primitive and simple when compared to those of Earth. Due to this, the quality of the paper is somewhat rough, has a scabrous and unsmooth texture.

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Again but as what should not be forgotten, special thanks to Coju for the achievement of this, I could never achieve this without his help in both concept sketching and lore-supportive tips!

Now, I've finished posting the all pages starring Ardennon's lovely Sergal lady! We dearly hope you all could enjoy the pages~!


Art by me and  Coju
Character belongs to  Ardennon
English Translation and Lore Correction Help by  Coju

The fictional species belong to the world of Vilous created by  Mick39 and  Kiki-UMA